For my final draft, I plan of organizing my paper better, to make sure it flows. I play on looking at They Say/ I Say to help me better introduce my quotes, and make sure they fit in my paper and they do not look out of place. One of my biggest challenges will be making sure my quotes are in the right place and making sure that they help better my argument of beauty in sports. I am going to make sure I understand They Say/ I Say and use the advice they give to help me. The other thing I am going to do is try to make my claim sentences better, so they tie back to my thesis.
They Say/I Say is an AMAZING resource. I would also recommend rereading Armstrong. Make those quote sandwiches in the margins of his essay!